AU: Cursed: Chapter 11

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

Title: Cursed
Author: Madison
Pairing: Nick and Greg
Rating: R
Summary: The Cliched Plotlines: Highschool + Vampires = Buffyverse. Greg is the Slayer. Grissom is the Watcher. And Nick is....well you know the drill.
Disclaimer: CSI belong to the CBS. The Buffyverse belongs to Joss Whedon.

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New Chapter
Do you think a creature as evil as that can change, Greg?

Comments

[kennedy-unknown.livejournal.com]

Is it totally wrong to picture Nick in that long black leather trenchcoat and find yourself drooling like Homer Simpson over pig fat and sacrelicious donuts?

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

Not at all. ;p I even have visual aids!

(http://photobucket.com)

[kennedy-unknown.livejournal.com]

Mmm... gummi Venus de Milo ;)

[esia-x.livejournal.com]

Oooh, he is positively delectable... with or without the trenchcoat ;) I do like a man in leather though.

Thanks for that :D

[http://users.livejournal.com/onion_/]

Guh.

Damn. I should check this comm more regularly. *Now* I know what I was missing from reading the story. I kept seeing Angel in my head instead of Nick in leather. This- it just completes the image in my mind now. Yes, can die happy now. Visual aids are the best. *nods*

oh it's jean here by the way, from the other N/G archive..

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

Hi jean! ::waves:: Yeah, Nick in leather just makes us girls go...GAH! I'm still keeping my fingers crossed that CSI Nick gets into leather in future episodes! ::kneels and starts praying::

[esia-x.livejournal.com]

Haha. Of course it's not... I do too ;) Though I am extremely depraved.

Gorgeous icon, by the way.

[nicky69.livejournal.com]

Sorry it's been a while since I commented on this story but I'm just now catching up with it.

I really like this version of Sunnydale and you have adapted both CSI and Buffy very well to create a fascinating world. Good job!

Oh yes, Nicky in leather, I am so loving this, thanks for the visual aid *joins in the Homer style drooling*.

Hugs Lou:)

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

lol! Thanks so much for the encouragement, Lou! :)

[katbcoll.livejournal.com]

Caught up with the last two chapters. Seriously, this is good. Oh and the visual aid you posted. Dayum, Nick in a leather coat.

who's the nummy treat now?

Oh gods... Mr. Hodges with a crush on Miss Willows?! *falls over howling*

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

nummy treat! hee hee! He sure is! ::suddenly wonders if they will have CSI actions figures::

Thanks so much hon!

[kennedy-unknown.livejournal.com]

Can you imagine what we would all do if we had Nick/Greg action figures?

[esia-x.livejournal.com]

*Screams happily*. Yay for the kiss! It was hot ;)

I loved how Nick didn't respond and Greg thought that he'd done something stupid, then Nick couldn't help himself and pulled him back in for another one.

I also like how you incorporate lines from the actual shows and add bits what you've thought up too :) It makes a change from a story that has every single line from the show.

Keep it up!

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate the encouragement!