*Screams happily*. Yay for the kiss! It was hot ;)
I loved how Nick didn't respond and Greg thought that he'd done something stupid, then Nick couldn't help himself and pulled him back in for another one.
I also like how you incorporate lines from the actual shows and add bits what you've thought up too :) It makes a change from a story that has every single line from the show.
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Date: 2006-04-16 07:17 pm (UTC)I loved how Nick didn't respond and Greg thought that he'd done something stupid, then Nick couldn't help himself and pulled him back in for another one.
I also like how you incorporate lines from the actual shows and add bits what you've thought up too :) It makes a change from a story that has every single line from the show.
Keep it up!