AU: Cursed: Chapter 11

[schizojuc.livejournal.com]

Title: Cursed
Author: Madison
Pairing: Nick and Greg
Rating: R
Summary: The Cliched Plotlines: Highschool + Vampires = Buffyverse. Greg is the Slayer. Grissom is the Watcher. And Nick is....well you know the drill.
Disclaimer: CSI belong to the CBS. The Buffyverse belongs to Joss Whedon.

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New Chapter
Do you think a creature as evil as that can change, Greg?

Comments

[kennedy-unknown.livejournal.com]

Is it totally wrong to picture Nick in that long black leather trenchcoat and find yourself drooling like Homer Simpson over pig fat and sacrelicious donuts?

[nicky69.livejournal.com]

Sorry it's been a while since I commented on this story but I'm just now catching up with it.

I really like this version of Sunnydale and you have adapted both CSI and Buffy very well to create a fascinating world. Good job!

Oh yes, Nicky in leather, I am so loving this, thanks for the visual aid *joins in the Homer style drooling*.

Hugs Lou:)

[katbcoll.livejournal.com]

Caught up with the last two chapters. Seriously, this is good. Oh and the visual aid you posted. Dayum, Nick in a leather coat.

who's the nummy treat now?

Oh gods... Mr. Hodges with a crush on Miss Willows?! *falls over howling*

[esia-x.livejournal.com]

*Screams happily*. Yay for the kiss! It was hot ;)

I loved how Nick didn't respond and Greg thought that he'd done something stupid, then Nick couldn't help himself and pulled him back in for another one.

I also like how you incorporate lines from the actual shows and add bits what you've thought up too :) It makes a change from a story that has every single line from the show.

Keep it up!