First timer

[pista.livejournal.com]

So this is my first time speaking up in this community. I have been reading quite a bit of the fics on here, and I'm loving every second of it.

Last night I was writing this story, and there was this one part that I thought would be cool to open a G/N fic with, but I've tried writing slash; it doesn't work. So I had this idea this morning... prompts. It could be a great way to cure writer's block. If it's a dumb idea, say so, but if anyone's interested, they could try the following prompt:

"What do you want from me?" I whispered in his ear.

"Your body," he replied, groaning slightly as I ran my tongue down his earlobe. At least he was honest. I kissed him, hard. I had feelings for him, but at the moment, my body for his seemed like a fair trade.

If you use it, feel free to edit it. If you don't like it, don't knock it; I'm sensitive. I wish I could be open to constructive criticism, but it's not often that I write anything I like, and even though it's just a few lines, I like them.

ttfn =)

Comments

[dontwantmeback.livejournal.com]

That's very good. I'd read a fic that started with that. ^_^ *once was written a fic that began with 'Bobby was bored'. And we all know what happens after that*

Anyway, I _would_ steal it from you, but it sounds more like something you'd see in a PWP than...well, _anything_ I could _possibly_ write. *can't write porn. At all*

However, aside from me wanting to tell you that your little paragraph was good (Though, technically speaking, hit enter before someone new speaks, even if you're in a hurry.) I wanted to say that if you're interestested, I can try and help you learn to write slash. I've done it before - though I never heard back from the one person and the other one still hasn't finished her fic so I'm not sure to what degree of sucess. I write mildly, for the most part, so I tend to teach to write mild slash the same way.

I'm rambling....Stopping now.

Great paragraph!

[pista.livejournal.com]

Heh, thanks. But the thing is, I'd have a hard time capturing their characters, see. I may think about it, but for the time being I'm going to have to decline. But thanks for the offer. =)

[girlphoenix.livejournal.com]

I just have to say, dude, that's hot. Okay, that's all my random commenting. :D

[viva-nova.livejournal.com]

Mmm, that sounds delicious. I suck at writing smut, though... but I'd love to read some slash that had that in it. Whew.

[carnapepper.livejournal.com]

Ah haha. I think I just might have to take that juicy little morsal from you. *Runs off to indulge the relentless pwp muse*