Just one fic for you....
Apr. 24th, 2007 11:38 amHola again!...lol..This is another fic..I hope that you like it!^_^!
Title: Nuestro camino.
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary:..are together..
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: : I don’t own them.
Author’s Note: Beta'd by
animefanboy0110(Muchas gracias, corazón ^_^). This is just a little fic.
Constructive criticism is always welcome
They work hard every day.
Both...
...face death and broken families.
...deal with other people mistakes.
...see the worst of people.
...listen to voices that none can hear.
...give closure to sad souls.
And between blood, tears, daily madness....
Nick and Greg are together...
Lazy time on bed and sweet lovemaking,
Shopping groceries and cleaning their home,
Laundry time and ironing shirts (only Nick does that)
Calls to their families to update them about their lives,
Paragliding and outdoors picnics (Greg loves them).
They have love...they have everything.
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Date: 2007-04-24 05:27 pm (UTC)i loved it
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Date: 2007-04-28 04:29 am (UTC)1. Shopping groceries and cleaning their home -- Are they shopping for groceries, or should it have a comma meaning that they shop and also get groceries?
2. Paragliding and outdoor picnics (Greg loves them) -- This is more nitpicky on my part, because it was Nick who wanted to go paragliding, and I always associate that with him and not Greg. Scuba diving is what I associate with Greg. And I think they both would love outdoor picnics. But, again, this is more me being nit-picky with canon.
Otherwise, much love for your short.
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Date: 2007-04-30 05:49 am (UTC)I read your comment and...
1.They are shopping for groceries, no comma here.I'm sorry for give a wrong idea. My head think in English and my hand write in Spanish..^_^U
2.I know that the canon says: "Greg=scuba diving",and I understand you being "nitpicky"^_^ but I liked the idea of "Nick+Greg=Paragliding"..lol
Muchas gracias for your comments, they help me to improve my English.
Love^_^!
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