Hola Hola d(^_^)b..HeLLo..

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Okay...Hello...Hola a todos..I'm new here, as a writer, not as reader...lol..Anyway, I let myself convince of write some piece, so here we are...my first bite in N/G fics...mmm..tasty d(^_~)b

Title: Your parfum

Rating: I think that PG

Warnings/Spoilers: none

Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters.

Summary: Blueberry…

A/N: Well...This is my first posted Nick/Greg fic ( or drabble?). Be patience with me because I always write in Spanish and this is my way to improve my English. d(^_^)b I don’t have a beta, so any spelling or grammar errors are mine. Constructive criticism is always welcome. Thank you.Gracias

 

 

 

 

 

Blueberry.

 

 

Nick can smell it everywhere.

 

 

In his car.

In his closet.

In his sheets.

In his skin..

and like every smell...it brings memories with it.             

 

 

Spiky blond hair on his chest.

Brown eyes full of love.

Soft and scarred skin.

Whispers of forever.

 

 

Blueberry

 

 

It is Greg's scent.

 

 

 

 

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_slytherin_girl/]

Muy bien! Escribes ud. 'drabble' muy bien! Su ingles es bien pero su gramatica necesitas un poco de ayudar.

And that was my attempt at Spanish after not trying to speak or write it for years. I admittedly had to look up a couple of words and my grammar is probably crap, but I tried!

Anyhoo, your grammar is good in the drabble partially because of the style, but I actually appreciated it because of that. I think it's good to start out small when you're still learning a language. I only (attempted to) mention it because I noticed a problem in your introduction. I think what you meant was "I was convinced to write something' or "I let myself be talking into writing a piece.' Everything else was good though. :D

Gracias

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Your spanish is rusty..but I like it!! ^_^!..Thanks for your correction..sometimes I think in English and write in Spanish ...sorry..
But thank for read it...

[csikat.livejournal.com]

Aw thats sweet. Nice first drabble.

Gracias

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Thank you...^_^!

[marufreak.livejournal.com]

Aaw.. short but very sweet! ^^
Decime que tenés fics escritas en español :D Siempre leo/escribo en inglés, así que si tenés pasame alguna por favor ^^ De dónde sos?
Bueno... me dejo de babblear :P
Besos! Cuidate

Gracias

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Thank for read it. Bueno tengo algunos fics pero no están publicados aquí..los voy a comenzar a publicar de a poco en mi journal...pero si gustas te los puedo enviar por correo...ahh me olvidaba..soy de Argentina y tu?..
Nos vemos.

[animefanboy0110.livejournal.com]

I loved this! Great job, it flowed mega-well! As for betaing, I'd be more than happy to help :D.

Gracias.

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Hi!!..thanks for your comments...I will take your beta-service offer ^_^!

[nohope02.livejournal.com]

Wow.
That's short but effective.
I really like it =]
xoxoxo

Gracias.

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Thank you!..^_^!

[beelikej.livejournal.com]

Heh. Your intro is longer than the drabble, but I'm glad I clicked the cut;) I liked this: short and sweet.

Gracias.

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Yeah I know that about my intro..lol..thanks for read it!..^_^!

[prettiful-pout.livejournal.com]

Hi ya! I really liked this, it was cute and oh so adorable.

¡Soy el totalmente 100% de habla inglesa con el francés lanzado adentro porque es obligatorio a través de escuela aquí así que usted puede conjeturar que estoy escribiendo esto hacia fuera a través de un traductor! el xp de todos modos, eso era muy lindo y algo que Nicky pensaría. Esto probablemente incluso no hará sentido usted el *laughs*

Byes! ^^

Hi Ya!

[my-only-reason.livejournal.com]

Hello...Thanks for your comments. Your translator is really good because I understand all..lol...I'm a 100% Spanish speaker, with also a bit of French inside( High School, of course)and lots of English too.

Thanks again for read my little piece.

d(^_^)b