My first Nick/Greg ficlet

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

This is my first post to this community and my first Nick/Greg drabble. Constructive criticism and comments always welcome.

Title: First Night
Pairing: Nick/Greg
Rating: PG 
Summary:Nick takes a shower
Warnings: None
Notes: It's a drabble (exactly 100 words) and my first Nick/Greg pairing *yay*. This was written especially for  softcake_70

As he stepped out of the shower Nick caught a glimpse of himself in the mirror. He turned slightly to get a better look at his ass.

 

“Damn, I’m looking good.” Thought Nick, still examining his own reflection. A firm ass and a washboard stomach, he was certainly glad of all the hours he was putting in at the gym. 

 

Tonight was the night and they both knew it. Still damp, Nick wrapped the bath towel around his lower half, taking a deep breath before walking hurriedly back to the bedroom.

 

Greg was under the sheets, waiting expectantly.

Comments

[isegrim-chan.livejournal.com]

*smiles broadly* Sweet. I was giggling. The picture of Nick admiring himself... priceless.

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your comment. Who wouldn't admire that body? mmmh... *giggles*

[mickeylover303.livejournal.com]

Vanity, thy name is Nick.

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Very true. He knows he looks good, we know he looks good. Everyone is happy...

Thanks for your comment.

[heartagram-lala.livejournal.com]

ok nick checking himself out hot, greg checking nick out = hotter =P

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Thanks for your comment. Nick is hot, Greg is hot, together they are hotter....Or something like that. *giggles*

[heartagram-lala.livejournal.com]

lol, together they threaten to spontaneously combust!

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Oh, I like it...So hot....

[softcake-70.livejournal.com]

I'm still so happy about this! :) *hugs* Thanks again!

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

It makes me happy that you are happy. *hugs*,I'm glad you like it, it's not everyday I write slash fics for someone...*giggles*.

[mangojunkie.livejournal.com]

I don't know.. this might be just a few words, but the effect it has on me is unbelievable. It is just.... I don't know... great. For me as a writer of long fics it still is some kind of art I will never achieve to write something this short and say practically everything with it. Absolutely wonderful. =) Love it.

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Wow. Thanks, I'm not sure what to say...I like you a lot, you have made me very happy with those comments. *giggles*

It's only the second fic I have written (the first was 1339 words), so I wasn't sure how the length would work out, but I decided to post it here because I was fairly happy with it myself.

Your comments are beautiful.

[mangojunkie.livejournal.com]

As a writer myself I know how important feedback can be and how much it can be needed.

If you want to get more comments I would advise you to write another fic =) Preferably a prequel or sequel to this little piece of art =)

[kate-weaver.livejournal.com]

Yes, feedback is always useful.

I'm planning to write a prequel to this. Hopefully next week.