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[jenbachand.livejournal.com]

I'm new to this community & this is my first attempt at Slash. My lovely friend medicinal_mirth has written me a couple Greg/Nick drabbles. This is a follow up to her short story about Greg & Sara shopping.


Title: No Talking
Rating: Mature/NC-17
Warnings: Consensual Sex
Summary: Greg needs to shut up.
Spoilers: Through season 6.

“Sara sort of knows,” Greg gasped out. He had been assaulted as soon as he walked through the door. His shirt was somewhere in the living room, belt in the hall way, and his pants were being slowly dragged down his legs by hands while his lover’s mouth was slowly working his underwear down. Brown eyes glittered up at him

“I told you it was ok if she found out, that’s why I told you where to take her,” he said before swallowing Greg’s cock in one go. Greg leaned his head back against the wall and allowed his very skilled partner to work his magic. He swirled his tongue around the head and did this little flutter thing on the underside that caused Greg to gasp and grab his lover’s shoulders to steady his wobbly knees

“She mentioned that she’s seeing someone,” that statement caused the man on his knees to stop his ministrations

“I really don’t want to talk about Sara and Griss right now Greg,” said Nick as he stood up, grabbed Greg’s hand and proceeded to drag him over to the bed and erase all thoughts of Sara, Griss, and what ever was going on with them.

Comments

[tanisafan.livejournal.com]

Hee! Great first slash-ficlet, you should definitely write more!
I read the shoppig bit as well, would love to see how that story progresses. If you decide to write a follow-up, I'd be dying to read it :).

(Also: ick, Grissom, you silly twat.)

[lizphairrulz.livejournal.com]

Very good! Grissom + Sara = NO!

[wojo62.livejournal.com]

great first fic. (although the rating is off, should be rated R) it's short and hot. good job.

[quantrail.livejournal.com]

NC-17 and R ratings have me confused. Which should be used for what? I'm Irish so our ratings are a bit easier for me to understand. (we only have G, PG, 12+, 15+ and 18+)

[wojo62.livejournal.com]

Well to put bluntly : ) NC-17 is graphic description of sexual intercourse (anal sex or vaginal). R is for blowjobs, handjobs, dry humping. Hope that helps. You wrote a good story.

[quantrail.livejournal.com]

Ooops, the story wasn't mine, I was just trying to figure out what the ratings are all about =D
Thanks for explaining though, for some reason I had it in my head that R was worse than NC-17 *shakes head*

[boy-ish.livejournal.com]

Graphic is graphic. The specific "act" doesn't matter.

[jenbachand.livejournal.com]

I'm confused too. The other place I post has gone to General, Teen, Mature for their ratings. Because how do you draw the line on how much smut constitutes an NC-17? Better a higher rating & no one get panties all bunched up.

[it-glitters.livejournal.com]

I wanted to drop a line and say that I thought this was great!

And as for the rating thing - I believe that graphic is graphic. So if your fic had only included Nick started to blow Greg... and ended there - it would be R. Anything more descriptive than that would go to NC17. But the problem with ratings is it is really up to interpretation. Better safe than sorry generally.

[abbynormalitis.livejournal.com]

Sara+Griss=Yes! They are practically the only other OTP besides Nick/Greg. ^^ By the way, 'He had been assaulted as soon as he walked through the door.' *totally* Nick's style, the story was very in-character for the drabble it was XD.