Missing Out - Written for the 'Toy' Challenge

[serenity151979.livejournal.com]

Title: Missing Out
Chapter: Nine
Pairing: Nick and Greg
Rating: R
Summary: At last, we come to an end. Beta'd, as always, by the wonderful shacky20
Disclaimer: Please mummy, I want them!


Missing Out - Chapter Nine

You can find the previous chapters below:

Missing Out - Chapter One

Missing Out - Chapter Two

Missing Out - Chapter Three

Missing Out - Chapter Four

Missing Out - Chapter Five

Missing Out - Chapter Six

Missing Out - Chapter Seven

Missing Out - Chapter Eight

Comments

Goddess!

[yo-helena.livejournal.com]

Y'know, I never realized we had a goddess in our midst until I read this. I sat down to write a review for chapter eight until I realized chapter nine had already been posted! ^_^ Let me tell you that after a somewhat embarrassing day, being able to relax with this wonderful story is better than chocolate, a massage, or tequila. (IE: Whatever's relaxing, although tequila's nasty and I'm trying to veer away from the sugar. ^_-) I adored how Greg got Nick relaxed (Yummy!) and how he called Warrick up so Nick and he could work things out. It's just the sort of sweet, thoughtful thing our little Greggo would do.

I can't tell you how wonderful I thought this story was. Although absolutely all of your work is amazing, I felt that this was your best. Your writing has matured (not that it was ever not mature!) and your ideas and plot points had the reader eager (IE: desperately wanting) the next installment. You made our two boys believable, sweet, serious- it was just excellent, no question about it. I especially loved the tiny details you included, like how Greg looked in the shower and how Warrick laid down the law for Greg.

But... *sobs* Like everyone else says, it's over! No! However, I'm sure we haven't heard the last of you, and even if (for some unknown reason) you can't write for a while, rest assured you've left behind a fabulous story that Nick/Greg fans can really get behind. Plus, you deserve a break. The work you put into this is obvious, so pat yourself on the back... you definitely deserve it!

Re: Goddess!

[serenity151979.livejournal.com]

Wow. I think this is my favourite review yet! You write the most awesome reviews, it's obvious how much thought you put into them, and I appreciate that.
I'm glad you enjoyed the little details, I like to include a lot of layers to hopefully build a 3D story.
But, sadly yes, it is over. I think I'm more sad about that than anyone. I shall probably take a short break, let the plot bunnies gather again, but I'm by no means finished! I will be back! =D Although how I'm going to top this, I don't know! I think I've peaked! *giggles*