Fic: Surprise, surprise!

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Hi, I'm mexiraz and I've written a new fic for the #2 - Dirty Challenge at the ngcommunity.
It's also up on my LiveJournal, I hope you like it!

Title: Surprise, surprise!
Author: me!
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Greg has a strange surprise for his Nicky. How will Nick react?


Surprise, surprise!

"Where are we going?"
"Surprise, surprise!"
"Come on Greggo, you're driving since an half an hour!"
"Don't worry, here we are"
Greg unlocked the driver's door and quickly exited the car. He went to open the passenger's door and carefully he pulled out Nick from the passenger compartment. Nick had a blindfold on his eyes, so Greg had the delicate task to guide him up to elevator and as far as the door of their apartment. Nick stumbled one or two times but finally he accomplished to arrive in front of the door without falling, face to the ground.
Greg took the keys from his pocket and struggled to find the right one and make Nick stand in the same moment.
Hearing the sound of the keys Nick began to make questions, as a good Csi would make.
"So tell me, why did you put a blindfold on me? Was it necessary?"
"As you know Nicky I'm a little kinky and you look so pretty with that thing on...
Besides you're too much always worried, you always need to be in control... Sometimes you need to let things go, my dear, so could you please stay quiet for a moment? Your suprise is almost here..."
Nick tried to think what Greg had in mind but, knowing was no way to try to get in the head of Greg Sanders, he decided to let things go like his lover said before.
Greg opened the door and guided Nick towards the room, stopping at the center. After he let Nick alone and placed himself near the apartment door, where there were the light switches.
"Ok Nicky, you can put off your blindfold now"
When Nick did that, he found himself in a dark room. He didn't can understand where he was.
"So G, where's my suprise?"
"Here it is!"
Greg switched the lights on and Nick's eyes were blinded by the sudden light in the room.
Some seconds after he opened them and he stared stunned in front of Greg's surprise.
They were in their living room; all the furniture were moved to the proximity off the walls to make some free space in the middle. Everywhere there were lovely red candles and a sweet scent of mure invaded the room.
But...
Nick would never have been prepared to see what was standing in front of him.
In the center of the room there was a big inflatable swimming pool filled with mud!
"What are we going to do with this G?"
"Nick, strip."
Greg's voice, rough and full of lust made Nick shudder.
"But.."
"No but. Strip."
Nick obeyed. He stripped completely while Greg went through the room to light all the candles; when he finished he took his favorite mug and launched it to Nick... Nick was pulling his clothes on a pile and missed to catch it.
Greg began to shout, trying to seem pissed off.
"Nick, that was my favorite mug!"
"How I was supposed to catch it? And why you launched it?!"
"You did that on purpose, didn't you? Didn't you, you bad bad bad Nicky!"
He struggled with Nick and finally he managed to make Nick stumble and fall on the mud pool.
"Which game are you playing G?"
"The one in which you and me struggle in the mud and release your tensions and end horny like hell. Gotcha?"
Nick realized the purpose of his lover's surprise; he was so amazed by how caring Greg was and how much love he was giving to him. He wanted to make Nick let out all his problems and make him feel better...
It was a strange idea but the thought to let everything out felt like the right thing for him
With this idea in mind Nick quickly answered:
"Come here, you little brat. I'm gonna teaching you not to mess with Nick Stokes!"
Greg stripped fast a an lightning and launched himself on Nick gripping his upper arms. Nick turned him upside down and pinned him to the bottom of the swimming pool.
"So, what are you gonna do, Greggo? Let me win?"
"Never", answered Greg. He started to tickle Nick's belly, succeeding in having Nick squirn and give up the struggle. Again on top Greg tried to make Nick fall to the ground but he was faster; Greg found himself again trapped... He was on his knees and Nick was holding his arms behind his back.
"You were right, this little catfight has gotten me horny like hell!"
"Do you want to do something about that Nicky, don't you?"
"Yes babe, but not here. We can't do sex in the middle of a pool of mud!"
"I've alread fixed that, honey. Release your grip, we're gonna take a quick shower and I'll lead you to surprise number two!
Nick released Greg and went with him to the laundry. Here Nick, getting every second hornier, tried to grope Greg and have his wicked way with him but strangely Greg was refusing Nick's attentions.
"Baby I need you, please!
"I need you too, but you have to be patient. You can fuck me senseless only when you've seen suprise number two."
"Don't wanna wait!"
"It's my game Nicky, ok? I make the rules. If I say that you have to wait you have to, understand? I promise you it's worthy our waiting."
"Ok G, sorry if I snapped, but if I don't have you in the next five minutes I think I'll go insane and fuck you up the wall!"
"We'll do that another time Nicky. Let's go."
Finally there was the moment of surprise number two.
It was the perfect follow-up of the evening: Nick was in the bathroom, surrounded by another set of red candles. The tub was full of mure scented bubble bath and Greg was bouncing because he was longing to satisfy Nick's needs.
They entered in the bathtub quickly. In no time Nick was climbing onto Greg but Greg again stopped him.
"Don't even try to stop me, you little tease!"
"I don't want to tease you honey, I only want to satisfy you. Why don't you sit down and let me do everything? It's your evening tonight, I'll care of everything."
Nick was touched by Greg's sweet words. He thinked of how Greg was pure and sweet, so kind and gentle. He was so lucky to have him everyday in his arms, he couldn't have wanted anything more. He was in Heaven.
Greg pulled him out of his thougths kissing him passionately.
"Can I...?"
Nick nodded.
Nick decided to surrended and let Greg begin his show. With no teasing Greg sinked on Nick's hardness and began to lift and lower himself, slamming each time on Nick's cock and moaning everytime he sunk on him. Nick couldn't resist the urge to grab Greg's slim hips and thrust harder, faster and deeper until Greg was moving frantically on him. Greg was putting quite a show; while he was impaling himself on Nick he was moving one hand on his chest, pinching his nipples and toying with his belly button. It was also making something that everytime made Nick lose his mind: he was sucking his fingers.
He discovered this kink of Nick casually one day, while they were in a bar eating ice cream. Some ice cream had melted and was finished on Greg's fingers. When he began to lick them clean Nick was eyeing him with a look so full of lust that made Greg fear for his life in a good way. Nick pulled Greg up, paid the two ice creams and dragged Greg to the car, telling him they needed to go away because they had something urgent to do.
Greg never had gotten fucked so good like that day.
So now he was resuming the licking trick, that like always it short-circuited Nick' s mind. Nick thrusted even wilder and began moaning and saying dirty things to his pretty baby Csi.
"Oh baby so good, so tight, love that fingers in your mouth, suck them clean baby...
You like playing with me, don't you?"
"God yes.."
"You know I have a kink you your fingers, you bad boy..."
"Just think when I'm playing with my little hole thinking of you..."
Nick shuddered, he was almost coming.
"And when I hit my prostrate and think of them as your dick.."
Nick felt himself always there, almost there...
"And when I imagine you were there, hiding in the darkness, watching me and thinking of being my fingers and fucking me..."
That was the peak. Nick came so hard that his senses blackened for a while and he almost risked to smash his head on the tub. Greg came too, empting himself in the tub.
They lied there for a long time, unable to get up. When they recovered some strenght on their legs they got up and moved to the bedroom. Greg was lying there, trying to think what Nick had in mind. Nick went in the kitchen to take some orange juice but this was taking him an eternity, so Greg decided to take a little nap. He was tired, since it was him that did almost all the dirty job.

The first thing Greg saw when he got up was Nick's debauched smile. A second later he realized that his wrists and ankles were handcuffed to the bed and he was spread wantonly on the bed.
"Is this an idea of yours, Nicky?"
"No babe, only something I read in a lovely notebook in your drawer."
That notebook was the place where Greg wrote down some particular dreams he had. It wasn't strictly private but for him was really important, so he kept the notebook in the lower drawer hidden from everybody except Nick.
Greg remembered that the night before he came really hard in his sleep. Maybe Nick thought he was thinking something really hot and searched for a new entry in the book.
It was right. The entry reported a nice kinky dream.

17-6-05
Dear Notebook of my perverted dreams,
I had this lovely dream last night. I was cuffed to the bed, wrists and ankles, Nick standing in front of me. he had this look, you know? It was saying: "You've been a bad boy, you need to be punished, you know that G? That's that you get for messing with me, G. you never learn that? Now I'll make you scream so all Vegas will be able to hear you..."
So he was standing with this wicked glare and in his left hand he held the bag with our sex toys. He opened it and said: "Time to play, G"..

"Do I need to go on?"
"No thank you I remember everything."
"So, time to play G."
"So I'm in trouble?"
"Yes, you are."
Nick closed the notebook and placed on the nightstand. He took the bag with the sex toys and opened it, taking from there an anal bead. Greg watched it and silently in his head begged for it.
"What I have to do with this?"
"Nick, please..."
"Ok, you took care of my sexual needs so good before, now it's my turn to give you pleasure."
Nick placed himself between Greg's legs and took a bottle of lube, he placed the liquid on this hands and began to caress the lover's opening.
Greg was so aroused that he would have come pretty fast but Nick had another plans for him. When he was stretched enough Nick inserted the bead inside him, moving it and pulling it out.
Greg was making a lot of soft needy moans that Nick was recording in his brain for furure reference, like when he's really bored and his mind flies to Greg.
After some minutes Nick pulled out the bead from Greg's ass and took a long feather. He began to caress Greg with the feather and Greg began to squirm, especially when he passed it on the calves, the behind of his knees and his elbows. When he reached the nipples Greg shouted in ecstacy.
"Nick please I can't take it no more!"
"You will babe."
Greg was getting insane. Nick began to stroke himself leisurely, looking at him smugly. He wanted to crawl out of his skin, he felt so helpless. He wanted madly to be in Nick's lap giving the blowjob of his life but he couldn't. He was tied up and at Nick's mercy.
Nick continued to stroke himself until he was unable to look al Greg without the need of fuck him until he fell unconscious. He placed himself at Greg's opening and with a steady trust he entered him.
Greg shouted; he longed so bad the touch of his beloved mate, he felt he was on fire. There was nothing in the world, only him and Nick declaring their love for eachother.
Nick was fucking him so hard that his head collided to the bedhead everytime he thrusted.
When Nick found his prostrate he could no more stay quiet and shouted all his lust and love for him.
"Oh Nick I love you, Oh God you fuck me so hard, so good, again, faster, deeper, please make me come baby, Jesus I'm gonna burn!"
"Oh yes G, let me hear you"
"I love you Nicky, you're making me come, gimme some more!"
"G you're so tight, so hot, I think I'm gonna break you!"
"Do that, do that please I need that!"
Greg cried out even louder, making hear to all the neighbourhood his following litany of "Nick fuck me harder, fuck me harder!".
They both came some minutes after; they were both exausted but continued to kiss for a lot of time after their orgarms. When he couln't resist no more Nick placed himself besides Greg, who was still tied to the bed.
"Are you planning to untie me or I will remain like this for the rest of my life?"
"Now I'll do it"
nick took the cuffs away from Greg and caressed his wrists and ankles.
"The cuffs always give you ugly bruises."
"I like bruises Nick, they are one of my many kinks..."
"You're crazy, G."
"You've just untied me from the bed, don't try to do the "I'm an angel" part because I'm not buying it!"
"Ok, ok, we'll talk about this when we'll be fresher. Now I feel very tired."
"I feel guilty."
"Why?"
"You had to relax and now you're more tired than before!"
"I'm tired but I'm pleased, before I was tired but frustrated with my job."
"So you feel good right now?"
"I feel great, thank you G, I love so much."
"I love you too Nicky. It was an interessing evening, wasn't it?
"Yeah babe, I like your surprises."
"What?! You said it! You said it!"
"Oh my God what I've done?"

Comments

[0creativity.livejournal.com]

Mud wrestling is awesome and I can actually see Greg suggesting that as a way to help Nick relieve stress. It's also kind of funny that the pool was in their apartment for no other reason than I tried to talk my friend into putting a little kiddy pool in her dorm room but she wouldn't do it :(