New person + Fic
May. 31st, 2005 09:25 pmUh...So yeah. I'm new. Heh, obviously. Anyways, I was waiting for my muse to come back (she went on vacation), so I could make a post saying "hi I'm new. I have a story!" But she wasnt' coming back, and wasn't coming back, so I had to make do with out her.
Hi. I'm new. I have a story! I haven't written CSI slash before, but I've written other slashy goodness. I'm usually much better at the angst, but I'm just not in an angsty mood (obviously). Soooo I wrote a quick dialogue-only Nick/Greg. To my weird sense of humor (and my sister's as well), it's funny. So...*crosses fingers*
Title: Innocent
Author: Mordere (btw, my name's Mandy)
Pairing: Greg/Nick
Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Rating: PG-13 to be safe.
Summary: Greg didn't do it.
A/N: Fluffy little bit of dialogue, no actual slash or anything, mostly. Starts out with Greg, but you'd be able to figure that out by the second line. Oh, and it was just my sister and I checking over it (granted it's a whole 175 words long), but I <3 feedback like a madwoman.
"I don't know what you're talking about."
"Look, Greg. I know you did it. Now just 'fess up, I'll yell at you, and then we can move on with our lives."
"I'm telling you, I didn't do it."
"Greg..."
"What?"
"Quit being a jerk."
"I can't help it. It comes naturally."
"I can tell."
"Rawr."
"Oh come ON Greg. Look, I won't even yell at you. Just tell me you did it, and it'll all be fine. Look, I saw you put the evidence in your pocket, for chrissakes."
"Oh sure, go and pin incriminating evidence on me. Just because I happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time..."
"Greg..."
"I don't care what you say, I didn't put the superglue on your chair."
"And the superglue in your pocket?"
"Oh come ON! Who doesn't carry superglue in their pocket?"
"Me."
"You don't count."
"I don't count?"
"You know, you're pretty sexy when you get angry."
"Oh is that what this is?"
"Grrrrrrr."
"Oh shut up."
"Oh hey, Nick?"
"What?"
"Nice boxers."
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Hi. I'm new. I have a story! I haven't written CSI slash before, but I've written other slashy goodness. I'm usually much better at the angst, but I'm just not in an angsty mood (obviously). Soooo I wrote a quick dialogue-only Nick/Greg. To my weird sense of humor (and my sister's as well), it's funny. So...*crosses fingers*
Title: Innocent
Author: Mordere (btw, my name's Mandy)
Pairing: Greg/Nick
Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Rating: PG-13 to be safe.
Summary: Greg didn't do it.
A/N: Fluffy little bit of dialogue, no actual slash or anything, mostly. Starts out with Greg, but you'd be able to figure that out by the second line. Oh, and it was just my sister and I checking over it (granted it's a whole 175 words long), but I <3 feedback like a madwoman.
"I don't know what you're talking about."
"Look, Greg. I know you did it. Now just 'fess up, I'll yell at you, and then we can move on with our lives."
"I'm telling you, I didn't do it."
"Greg..."
"What?"
"Quit being a jerk."
"I can't help it. It comes naturally."
"I can tell."
"Rawr."
"Oh come ON Greg. Look, I won't even yell at you. Just tell me you did it, and it'll all be fine. Look, I saw you put the evidence in your pocket, for chrissakes."
"Oh sure, go and pin incriminating evidence on me. Just because I happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time..."
"Greg..."
"I don't care what you say, I didn't put the superglue on your chair."
"And the superglue in your pocket?"
"Oh come ON! Who doesn't carry superglue in their pocket?"
"Me."
"You don't count."
"I don't count?"
"You know, you're pretty sexy when you get angry."
"Oh is that what this is?"
"Grrrrrrr."
"Oh shut up."
"Oh hey, Nick?"
"What?"
"Nice boxers."
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Date: 2005-06-01 02:56 am (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2005-06-01 03:09 am (UTC)Loved the fic. Great dialogue. Very snappy and realistic.
I love your Greg's voice!
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Date: 2005-06-01 03:11 am (UTC)(dude... for the record? there is super glue in my back pack at all times... you never know!... plus it's awesome to glue people to untensiles.)
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Date: 2005-06-01 03:21 am (UTC)"Who doesn't carry superglue in their pocket?"
Hehehe. Lovely. :)
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Date: 2005-06-01 05:18 am (UTC)but who can blame him for wanting to see nick ass without the jeans....
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Date: 2005-06-01 08:13 am (UTC)evilgenius!no subject
Date: 2005-06-01 03:13 pm (UTC)ctx :D
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Date: 2005-06-01 07:24 pm (UTC)I don't have the characters' personalities quite down yet, but his was pretty easy to pick up on. I like to pretend he's got a serious side too. *gets hit over the head with a fic idea* Oh gosh.
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Date: 2005-06-01 07:25 pm (UTC)Oh, and yeah, I used to carry superglue in my backpack until it EXPLODED all over the place. Ick. Now I make do with duct tape.
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