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Title: Concludere
            Rating: Pg-13
            Characters: Nick and Greg 
            Summary: Nick visists Greg after Fannysmackin', spoilers for that episode.
            Disclaimer: Not mine, never will be, etc.
            Writer's Note: My first time writing anything for th love, so feedback will be beyond welcomed.

You’re cold. I’m ashamed that’s the first thing I noticed. Not your crazy hair, your chocolate eyes, the soft smell of citrus mingling with your expensive coffee. All  is stolen by the sterile hospital and its graven staff. Your hair is plastered to your forehead from the stress of staying asleep, your eyes closed in a vain attempt of forgetting, your otherwise comforting smell overwhelmed by the harsh hygienic tang of the room.

A nurse invades the space. I don't know what she's saying. She could be explaining the theory of relativity for all I know. Hell, the only thing relative here is you. And you're broken. I make some non-commitive noise and she smiles, drifting to another victim. 

I let go of your hand, though it never registered  I was holding it. There is a spasm in my pocket; I pick up my phone and answer, not knowing whose calling. I hear “sorry” and “work” followed by “early” and something else that I ignore. I close my phone, feather you a kiss on your brow that hopefully you’ll never remember. As I leave, I find myself mourning for your innocence. I don't want you to "grow up" and be like everyone else. You deserve more.


This is my firsrt time posting ee, so please tell me if I did anthing wrong. Thank you :)

Date: 2009-10-27 03:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devo79.livejournal.com
Looks like you did everything right =)
Nice little scene there making me want more.

Date: 2009-10-27 07:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillyg.livejournal.com
One reproach. It's too short! :p

Date: 2009-10-27 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charlie-jae.livejournal.com
Makes me ache for him. I like that you can feel what he's feeling.

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