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nickngregI love the episode 'Snakes' and Nick speaking Spanish made me all a tingle in all the good spots and so I had to write this little fic - I hope you like it.
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katydid417 for being my beta.
Title: Enough Translation
Author: Aussie chick fan aka godgaleshot
Rating: NC-17/Slash – Shameless Monkey sex fic.
Disclaimer: The characters don’t belong to me and I don’t get any money. All I own is my original characters and the little fantasies inside my head. If the Spanish translation is bad I’m sorry but I don’t speak Spanish:)
Pairing: Nick/Greg
Summary: Post Snakes. Greg learns that Nick speaks Spanish.
Spoilers: Season 5 – Snakes
Author's Note: I love Nick and Greg together so much that I had to write my own. Asesino means killer or murderer. Asi tirante mi cari o means so tight my love.
Nick was sitting on the couch in the dark when Greg got home from work. “What are you doing in the dark?” He asked kicking off his shoes.
“Thinking about immortality and snakes.” Nick replied shifting on the couch to make room for Greg to sit next to him. Ignoring the cleared spot Greg dropped himself down on to Nick’s lap and wrapped his arms around the brooding man.
“Oh, deep. I thought maybe you were thinking about me and touching yourself but then we’ve talked about that haven’t we? No touching yourself when Greg’s not around to watch.’ Greg joked trying to lighten the mood for a moment before getting serious. ‘I heard you got a bad case.” It wasn’t a question it was a statement. Greg knew that if he asked about the case Nick would clam up about it and not talk, but if Greg didn’t push Nick would open up all by himself. Greg could tell that Nick really needed to talk by the tight squeeze nick held him in. It was tight enough that if he didn’t let up soon, lack of oxygen might become an issue.
Nick leaned towards Greg and put his mouth to his for just a moment. Pulling away he practically spat, “Yeah, bad case a real mean asesino.”
Greg managed to force Nick back against the couch with a combination of pulling and pushing. He was wrong. Greg could tell from Nick’s eyes that he really just needed to forget about the case, about work and about everything serious and Greg knew just how to make him do that. Sitting up so that he was straddling Nick’s crotch, Greg reached his hands out and started unbuttoning Nick’s shirt. “I had a really slow boring shift myself but I did happen to find the shell casing that broke the case so to speak. So go Team Greg.” He said pushing his hard dick against Nick’s stomach.
***
Nick knew exactly what Greg was trying to do and for once he was grateful. He used his hands to push Greg back a little so that the next time he pushed his dick against Nick he would feel it brush against his own now hard cock.
“Wait. Did you speak Spanish before?” Greg asked stilling his hips eliciting a groan from Nick.
“We have too many clothes on,” Nick said instead of answering. Pulling at Greg’s shirt Nick managed to distract his lover but alas it was not to be for long. Nick could see Greg’s mind ticking and he knew that there was only one real way to get Greg to shut up and that was kissing or Nick’s cock in his mouth. As soon as he thought it, Nick was voting for his cock in Greg’s mouth. Not waiting for Greg to move, Nick thrust his hips high into the air off the couch causing Greg to slide off on to the floor with an audible bump. Taking advantage of both Greg’s position and his shock, Nick used that opportunity to stand and pull off his jeans and boxers all in one quick movement.
***
Before Greg knew what had happened, he was staring Nick’s erect cock in the eye. Not wanting to waste such a welcome offer Greg used Nick’s thighs to pull himself closer to his goal. Not even pausing to lick the drop of pre-come that had formed on the tip of Nick’s cock, Greg went straight to the root, deep throating Nick in one action.
Nick obviously had no idea what he wanted tonight because no sooner had Greg pulled back to take a breath, Nick had his arms around Greg’s waist. The next thing Greg knew he had been flipped over on to his hands and knees and he was now conveniently naked from the waist down. Greg had no clue as to what to expect next since Nick seemed to be having a problem deciding what he wanted tonight.
***
Nick tried to get himself to slow down and think about what he was about to do but he couldn’t seem to make himself stop. One moment he was looking at Greg’s firm ass and the next he was inside it. No lube and no condom just skin on skin. Just Nick and Greg as close as they had ever been. “Asi tirante mi cari o.” Nick moaned as he thrust his rock hard cock in and out of Greg’s tight asshole.
“Oh God. Fuck. Fuck me…what did you just say?” Greg grunted as Nick pushed his hips against the floor trying to get deeper inside of him.
“You’re so tight my love…oh fuck!” Nick replied as he pushed into Greg one last time.
Moaning as he came Greg couldn’t stop the giggle that escaped his mouth. “Fuck I think I have carpet burn on my dick.” Greg’s giggle turned into full blown laughter but quickly died into nothing when he realised that Nick was inauspiciously silent.
***
Pulling out of Greg, Nick tried to reason with himself about what had just happened but he couldn’t. He had behaved like an animal…like a dog.
Nick couldn’t make himself move off of Greg’s back where he was resting. “Oh God I’m sorry Greg.”
He sobbed.
“What the fuck? Why? That was the hottest fuck I’ve ever had.’ Greg said completely confused. ‘Well, except for that time when you tied me to the dinner table at your parents house and we almost got caught by your nephew.” His ass was sore from being fucked raw but it hurt in that good way where pain equalled pleasure.
“Greg you agreed to be tied up a head of time…I asked you first. I didn’t just take you like some animal. Fuck I came inside you with no condom.” Nick said trying to apologise.
“God Nick we have talked about that before and we are both clean. Fuck, I love you and I have wanted you inside me with no barriers for so long I just never thought you would ever let go of enough of your control for it to ever happen. But don’t you apologise to me for loving me cause that’s what you just did.” Greg finished rolling on to his back so that Nick lay on top of him still but they could look into each other’s eyes.
“It wasn’t…” Nick tried to say.
“Yes it was. What just happened was you loving me because there is no way you would have let go of your control otherwise.” Greg argued, touching Nick’s face to get his full attention.
“Fuck it was hot wasn’t it?” Nick asked blushing.
“I thought we were going to go up in smoke. One big Nick…Greg bonfire.” Greg answered trying to make Nick smile.
Nick snuggled down between Greg’s spread legs and put his head on Greg’s chest.
“G?” He asked.
“I love you too Nicky.” Greg said making Nick smile finally.
“Oh you are so sure that was what I was going to say hey?’ Nick taunted leaning up to look down at Greg. He left his mouth hovering just over Greg’s for a few moments before rubbing his mouth against Greg’s. Not really a kiss but it made both of them moan anyway. ‘I do love you Greg. You helped me chase the monster away.” Nick yawned lying his head back down on Greg’s chest. He was almost asleep when he heard Greg speak.
“I’m glad as long as you know you’re not the monster…”
X-posted every where.
Feed back is always welcome:)
Once again thanks to
katydid417 for being my beta.Title: Enough Translation
Author: Aussie chick fan aka godgaleshot
Rating: NC-17/Slash – Shameless Monkey sex fic.
Disclaimer: The characters don’t belong to me and I don’t get any money. All I own is my original characters and the little fantasies inside my head. If the Spanish translation is bad I’m sorry but I don’t speak Spanish:)
Pairing: Nick/Greg
Summary: Post Snakes. Greg learns that Nick speaks Spanish.
Spoilers: Season 5 – Snakes
Author's Note: I love Nick and Greg together so much that I had to write my own. Asesino means killer or murderer. Asi tirante mi cari o means so tight my love.
Nick was sitting on the couch in the dark when Greg got home from work. “What are you doing in the dark?” He asked kicking off his shoes.
“Thinking about immortality and snakes.” Nick replied shifting on the couch to make room for Greg to sit next to him. Ignoring the cleared spot Greg dropped himself down on to Nick’s lap and wrapped his arms around the brooding man.
“Oh, deep. I thought maybe you were thinking about me and touching yourself but then we’ve talked about that haven’t we? No touching yourself when Greg’s not around to watch.’ Greg joked trying to lighten the mood for a moment before getting serious. ‘I heard you got a bad case.” It wasn’t a question it was a statement. Greg knew that if he asked about the case Nick would clam up about it and not talk, but if Greg didn’t push Nick would open up all by himself. Greg could tell that Nick really needed to talk by the tight squeeze nick held him in. It was tight enough that if he didn’t let up soon, lack of oxygen might become an issue.
Nick leaned towards Greg and put his mouth to his for just a moment. Pulling away he practically spat, “Yeah, bad case a real mean asesino.”
Greg managed to force Nick back against the couch with a combination of pulling and pushing. He was wrong. Greg could tell from Nick’s eyes that he really just needed to forget about the case, about work and about everything serious and Greg knew just how to make him do that. Sitting up so that he was straddling Nick’s crotch, Greg reached his hands out and started unbuttoning Nick’s shirt. “I had a really slow boring shift myself but I did happen to find the shell casing that broke the case so to speak. So go Team Greg.” He said pushing his hard dick against Nick’s stomach.
***
Nick knew exactly what Greg was trying to do and for once he was grateful. He used his hands to push Greg back a little so that the next time he pushed his dick against Nick he would feel it brush against his own now hard cock.
“Wait. Did you speak Spanish before?” Greg asked stilling his hips eliciting a groan from Nick.
“We have too many clothes on,” Nick said instead of answering. Pulling at Greg’s shirt Nick managed to distract his lover but alas it was not to be for long. Nick could see Greg’s mind ticking and he knew that there was only one real way to get Greg to shut up and that was kissing or Nick’s cock in his mouth. As soon as he thought it, Nick was voting for his cock in Greg’s mouth. Not waiting for Greg to move, Nick thrust his hips high into the air off the couch causing Greg to slide off on to the floor with an audible bump. Taking advantage of both Greg’s position and his shock, Nick used that opportunity to stand and pull off his jeans and boxers all in one quick movement.
***
Before Greg knew what had happened, he was staring Nick’s erect cock in the eye. Not wanting to waste such a welcome offer Greg used Nick’s thighs to pull himself closer to his goal. Not even pausing to lick the drop of pre-come that had formed on the tip of Nick’s cock, Greg went straight to the root, deep throating Nick in one action.
Nick obviously had no idea what he wanted tonight because no sooner had Greg pulled back to take a breath, Nick had his arms around Greg’s waist. The next thing Greg knew he had been flipped over on to his hands and knees and he was now conveniently naked from the waist down. Greg had no clue as to what to expect next since Nick seemed to be having a problem deciding what he wanted tonight.
***
Nick tried to get himself to slow down and think about what he was about to do but he couldn’t seem to make himself stop. One moment he was looking at Greg’s firm ass and the next he was inside it. No lube and no condom just skin on skin. Just Nick and Greg as close as they had ever been. “Asi tirante mi cari o.” Nick moaned as he thrust his rock hard cock in and out of Greg’s tight asshole.
“Oh God. Fuck. Fuck me…what did you just say?” Greg grunted as Nick pushed his hips against the floor trying to get deeper inside of him.
“You’re so tight my love…oh fuck!” Nick replied as he pushed into Greg one last time.
Moaning as he came Greg couldn’t stop the giggle that escaped his mouth. “Fuck I think I have carpet burn on my dick.” Greg’s giggle turned into full blown laughter but quickly died into nothing when he realised that Nick was inauspiciously silent.
***
Pulling out of Greg, Nick tried to reason with himself about what had just happened but he couldn’t. He had behaved like an animal…like a dog.
Nick couldn’t make himself move off of Greg’s back where he was resting. “Oh God I’m sorry Greg.”
He sobbed.
“What the fuck? Why? That was the hottest fuck I’ve ever had.’ Greg said completely confused. ‘Well, except for that time when you tied me to the dinner table at your parents house and we almost got caught by your nephew.” His ass was sore from being fucked raw but it hurt in that good way where pain equalled pleasure.
“Greg you agreed to be tied up a head of time…I asked you first. I didn’t just take you like some animal. Fuck I came inside you with no condom.” Nick said trying to apologise.
“God Nick we have talked about that before and we are both clean. Fuck, I love you and I have wanted you inside me with no barriers for so long I just never thought you would ever let go of enough of your control for it to ever happen. But don’t you apologise to me for loving me cause that’s what you just did.” Greg finished rolling on to his back so that Nick lay on top of him still but they could look into each other’s eyes.
“It wasn’t…” Nick tried to say.
“Yes it was. What just happened was you loving me because there is no way you would have let go of your control otherwise.” Greg argued, touching Nick’s face to get his full attention.
“Fuck it was hot wasn’t it?” Nick asked blushing.
“I thought we were going to go up in smoke. One big Nick…Greg bonfire.” Greg answered trying to make Nick smile.
Nick snuggled down between Greg’s spread legs and put his head on Greg’s chest.
“G?” He asked.
“I love you too Nicky.” Greg said making Nick smile finally.
“Oh you are so sure that was what I was going to say hey?’ Nick taunted leaning up to look down at Greg. He left his mouth hovering just over Greg’s for a few moments before rubbing his mouth against Greg’s. Not really a kiss but it made both of them moan anyway. ‘I do love you Greg. You helped me chase the monster away.” Nick yawned lying his head back down on Greg’s chest. He was almost asleep when he heard Greg speak.
“I’m glad as long as you know you’re not the monster…”
X-posted every where.
Feed back is always welcome:)
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Date: 2005-05-23 08:02 am (UTC)I love that part in Snackes too. I downloaded the clip off that site, and find myself watching it on repeat. ;D
Anyway, wonderful fic!
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Date: 2005-05-23 08:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 08:20 am (UTC)And snakes - I knew what you meant, I can't type either:)
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Date: 2005-05-23 08:46 am (UTC)And the correct translation of “You’re so tight my love…oh fuck!” is "Eres tan estrecho, amor mio ... oh joder"
Sorry, but "tirante" has pain connotation.
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Date: 2005-05-23 08:58 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 09:02 am (UTC)But only if you write more Nick/Greg fics *^__^*
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Date: 2005-05-23 09:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 09:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-06-10 03:07 pm (UTC)I remembered reading your post and thinking how generous you are to offer to translate. I'm working on something right now where I'd like to have Nick saying something in Spanish to Greg. I was wondering if you are still interested in helping? I'm not in a hurry, so if you're busy don't feel pressured. In fact I haven't even written it yet.
I'd be very grateful if you could help me.
Thanx and it IS a G/N story. :-D
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Date: 2005-06-12 07:15 am (UTC)When you need your sentences in spanish, feel free to send them to me. I'll do anything for more N/G stories and write in my own languaje isn't something hard to do. =P
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Date: 2005-06-12 07:55 am (UTC)Should I just send it to you through here?
Thanks again, catlover2x
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Date: 2005-06-12 08:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 01:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 01:45 pm (UTC)"cariño" is a sweet word as honey. The problem is that in spanish we use diferent words that in english and with diferent meanings.
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Date: 2005-05-23 03:40 pm (UTC)ahahahhahaha. yeah, i see the point.
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Date: 2005-05-23 10:45 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 11:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 12:16 pm (UTC)So GOOOOD. Oh so very good.
*drools*
And oh so very very HOT with capital H.O.T!!!!!!
*whimpers*
annakas
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Date: 2005-05-23 12:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 06:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 06:44 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 07:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-05-23 07:39 pm (UTC)My email if you're interested is : pike03@iprimus.com.au