nickngreg | Question and help!!! (Reply)

I have a pretty large multi fandom, multistory, I guess universe going. So far ir is mostly NCIS and CSI Miami but I have plans to pull in the other 2 CSIs.The story the plot bunnies have been nibbling on is an immediate post Grave Danger story. Nick and Greg have been involved in a long term relationship but Nick breaks it off after being buried. It's kind of complicated but the reason he gives Greg for breaking it off is that he wants a traditional family, that he thought about it while burried and realized that was what he really wants.

The real reason is while he was buried a close friend of Greg's who used to be an old Girl friend was at the lab actually she has credentials of a sort and uses them to gain access to the labs to give Greg emotional support while his lover is missing. The team and Nick's family is unaware of their relationship. Nick has met this old flame of Greg's before and is really jealous of her. Sara unaware of all of this tells Nick about the woman being inthe lab while they are looking for Nick. Nick being emotionally a wreck still fromthe kidnapping breaks it off with Greg.

I add in hte other CSIs and NCIS to the story cause at the same time that Grave Danger was taking place,on NCIS Tony had just gotten rid of the plague and Kate was shot and killed by Ari, on CSI Miami a dirty bomb plot was averted, on CSI NY Danny's past with the Tangelwood boys was made known and he had shot the cop.

There are other plot twists, but I wanted to know from you die hard Nick and Greg fans if this sounded like a good premise or should I trash it. I actually started the story but the Nick and Greg parts arent posted yet.