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[swordpoker.livejournal.com]

Alright, I know a lot of fluff is going around, but as I have said countless times, Fluff + Me = Not Work. There might be a fluke here or there, but this is not one of those times.

No More, Forever
by Tali

summary: In one word, forever.
notes: "Forever" is used in this drabble like seven times. I couldn't help it, Nick and Greg in my head told it to write it that way. Spur of the moment fic, written in like two minutes.
category: Angst
warnings: none



I remember once upon a time, I was so in love with him.

It felt like I was drowning, I was intoxicated and I loved it. Just like I loved him.

But you know, that can't last because nothing ever lasts in my life.

I was hopelessly and shamelessly in love, and it seemed like it was going to be that way forever.

Forever? Forever was only a few months before slowly, this newness and wonderfulness I had associated with it slowly began to disappear. I didn't try and pay to much attention, blaming the strain of the job. It was going to get better because we were going to be together forever.

I think it all crumbled down because we were both trying to keep it they way it was in the beginning, the I'm-so-in-love-with-you-I-can't-keep-my-hands-off-you phase. I think it all crumbled down because we were to opposite, I was open he wasn't.

It was combination of things that led me here, in the shambles of a relationship that should of lasted forever. Could of lasted forever. Maybe a different time, a different place, but maybe doesn't get me far.

Maybe doesn't give you forever.



x-post to nickngreg, csi_slash and my journal.

Comments

[fixmein-45.livejournal.com]

No more Nick and Greg? ::cries::

[http://users.livejournal.com/_slytherin_girl/]

*cries* They will always love each other *lalala* I can't hear you *lalala* (don't take this in a bad way.)

[le-mot-mo.livejournal.com]

Oh, perfect combination of a well-written fic with a dash of sadness, a whiff of utter heartbreak and a lot of forevers! Sigh!

Great job!

[xoxomelissa7.livejournal.com]

*sniff* Aww...

the I'm-so-in-love-with-you-I-can't-keep-my-hands-off-you phase. <-- I love that, by the way. Great line.

[carnapepper.livejournal.com]

Oh dear! *breaks down*

I really like how it could be taken from either of their perspectives, cause it never says any names. And it fits for both of them, too, though I imagined Greggo telling it when I read it.

I really liked it though. You should write more drabble. *nod*

[swordpoker.livejournal.com]

-hands tissue-

Mmm, thank you. I'm partial to that line myself, because it seems that most people when they write Nick/Greg it starts off like that.

[swordpoker.livejournal.com]

-hands tissue- I think I wrote it from Greg's point of view, though it was originally supposed to be Nick's. XD The open line I think makes it Greg then. ^^ I like doing openended fics.

And don't worry, I mainly write drabbles.

[swordpoker.livejournal.com]

Thank you! That's a big compliment.