Yikes, some cliffhanger, you evil, evil catlover! Of course I was able to go straight to the next chapter, so no harm done, but still. Happy to say I slept on this, so after reading it for a second time, I am able to comment a bit more coherently now;)
This starts of as a very funny chapter and sweet as well. The casual mentioning of an awesome blowjob made me giggle and the holding hands in the car was just too lovely. I also loved the reactions of Archie (sweetest guy in the lab imo) and Warrick (always da man) After doing a great job explaining the D/s dynamic in the first two chapters here you manage to paint a interesting picture of the clubscene, before it gets all messy. Both Nick and Greg still have a hard time playing their part and staying in D/s-mode, but because they got each other's back, they don't get found out (I was really worried about that). And then, as a reward for their admirable performance, you get them into trouble after all...
On to review the final* chapter...
*that was the 'final' I was getting ready for in my last comment, nothing to do with me studying (I left college behind numerous years ago:) but I had to prepare mentally and emotionally before continuing with your story. I'm so glad I did that:)
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Date: 2006-06-10 12:02 pm (UTC)Happy to say I slept on this, so after reading it for a second time, I am able to comment a bit more coherently now;)
This starts of as a very funny chapter and sweet as well. The casual mentioning of an awesome blowjob made me giggle and the holding hands in the car was just too lovely. I also loved the reactions of Archie (sweetest guy in the lab imo) and Warrick (always da man)
After doing a great job explaining the D/s dynamic in the first two chapters here you manage to paint a interesting picture of the clubscene, before it gets all messy. Both Nick and Greg still have a hard time playing their part and staying in D/s-mode, but because they got each other's back, they don't get found out (I was really worried about that). And then, as a reward for their admirable performance, you get them into trouble after all...
On to review the final* chapter...
*that was the 'final' I was getting ready for in my last comment, nothing to do with me studying (I left college behind numerous years ago:) but I had to prepare mentally and emotionally before continuing with your story. I'm so glad I did that:)