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[aleka-phoenix.livejournal.com]

Hey, I'm new, well to posting anyway, I've been reading this community for ages. Anyway, I wrote a drabble, I think it's 100 words exactly, inspired by the word "Beginnings". I haven't written anything in ages, so I'm a little nervous but here goes. I'm anxious to hear what you think.

Title: Beginnings
Author: aleka_phoenix
Warnings:none
Rating: G
Pairing: Nick/Greg
Disclaimer: I don't own anything etc...



It had started with breakfast after shift. Casual, sometimes with others, sometimes not, but always with an undercurrent of tension. Chemistry and coffee. Then it was videogames on weekends and days off, the tension growing as they spent more time together. Still tentative, beer and pizza, just friends. Consoles and casuality. Then came nights out when they weren't working, neither one voicing thoughts about where this might lead. Just drinking, knocking back shots, dancing, laughing. Clubbing and closeness. Then one night a drunken kiss. Clumsy and crude. But in that kiss Greg saw houses, dogs, fences, forever. Cuddles and completeness.

Let me know what you thought.

Comments

[wojo62.livejournal.com]

I like it. Maybe you'd consider continueing it into a full blown story.

[chaosy.livejournal.com]

Keep writing, please.