Oh dear, I know they're long, that's why I warned about provisions. I hope it's not too long. And Ch 3 is turning out funny which I wasn't expecting. But I guess a little humor after GD can be a good thing. Thank you for telling me what you liked, it's really great to hear and helps me understand if what I'm doing is working. I love that you got everything I was trying to say. Sigh. It's so nice to get a review like this.
was one of the hottest sex scenes ever You have no idea how much that means to me because I haven't written many sex scenes and I was terrified of this one! Thank you so much, :-)
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Date: 2005-06-10 04:27 am (UTC)was one of the hottest sex scenes ever You have no idea how much that means to me because I haven't written many sex scenes and I was terrified of this one!
Thank you so much, :-)