Silly one-shot.

[bloodanna.livejournal.com]

Title: Burned Out.
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: *Shrugs*.
A/N: Just a little meaningless one-shot. Can anyone think of a better title?!


"Stop doing that."
"I can't help it..."
"Here, put this on it, it'll feel better."
"Doubt it..."
"Well, don't rub it. Ugh, you're getting DNA everywhere."
"Yeah, but, rubbing it makes it feel better."
"It won't in the long run."
"Well...I don't care."
"Ok, that's it."
Nick walked out of the room.
"Hey, where are you going?"
"Don't worry, I'm not leaving."
"I know, that's what worries me."
Nick laughed and walked back to the bed, holding something in his hand.
Greg looked confused.
"What, is that?"
"Ducktape, and oven mitts."
Greg looked insulted.
"Hold out your hands."
"No."
"I'll step on your shoulder..."
"Fine. But I'm not happy about this."
"Good! And next time I'm going with you."
"Really?!"
"Yeah, well, someone has to remember the sunscreen. I mean who gos surfing with nothing on?!"
Nick walked out of the room, talking idly about the benefits of always having protection.
Greg just grinned wickedly.



Hope you liked. Creative criticism welcomed with open arms. Flaming welcomed with a pen, a piece of paper and a new idea. :)

Comments

[pknight.livejournal.com]

hee! Cute! Just what I needed before a roadtrip! Thank you!

[bloodanna.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Glad ya liked it. :)

[uknowuloveme20x.livejournal.com]

cute! i have the picture of Greg wet and surfing in my head now (and he looks hot! lol. this made my day! heh

[catlover2x.livejournal.com]

Oh that's adorable and I love the format. Skipping right past all the pesky pronouns but it's very easy to figure out. Great one!

[bloodanna.livejournal.com]

Thank you! In the first draft I'd had 'Nick said, Greg said' after almost every line, then I looked at it and thought 'that looks stupid' and thus took them out. Glad to know it works. :)

[catlover2x.livejournal.com]

Worked extremely well. It was great. :-D

[michaelchance.livejournal.com]

Would I be able to add your CSI stories to CSI Slash (http://www.chance.popullus.net/csislash/index.html)? Please? :)